Showing posts with label Reading. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Reading. Show all posts

Friday, July 3, 2020

I DID THE THING!! Please read this post before clicking the link!

It's here!!! Please read this post before clicking the link!


My new adult manuscript, AS LONG AS YOU'RE MINE, is now available to read FOR FREE on Swoon Reads. Just download the app, and follow this link to preview the manuscript. All I ask is that you download, read, and give it a rating once you're done please! Every few months Swoon Reads chooses a manuscript from this slushpile to offer a publishing contract through Macmillan. It's based on editor opinion, reader feedback, and which manuscripts gather the most interest. So every vote, comment, and rating will help. Please note that this is a New Adult manuscript, NOT Young Adult. So it's intended for a more mature audience than some of my other works. Please feel free to share the love and spread the word on this one. I need all the help I can get!

Click Here to download the app and start reading!


About the Book

Two years ago, Rennie Cobain's heart was hulk-smashed by Mack, an Emmy-winning, altar boy turned boy band icon. After a world tour as a guitar tech, Rennie gets an offer she should refuse: on Broadway.The show stars the only guy to ever break her heart. 
There's more than dignity at risk once the director discovers Rennie’s family legacy.Out of the orchestra pit and into the spotlight; blue-haired, fame-phobic Rennie is hand-fed to the press. She’s terrified the media will resurrect her past as a homeless, emotionally abused, musical prodigy. Rennie wants to be Rennie-not Kurt’s cousin.Not a survivor.Not a victim.
Mack understands her, but their first chance at love ended in agony. Now she has to kiss him every night in front of a packed house. Trusting Mack may be the only way Rennie can embrace her talent without selling her soul.


Thursday, December 26, 2013

Review: FOREVER INNOCENT by Deanna Roy

FOREVER INNOCENT by Deanna Roy  

Category/Genre: New Adult Contemporary

Pub Date: Available now!!
ARC Received from Casey Shay Press in exchange for an honest review. 
Dannie says: A gripping read, but I'm still looking for the ending! 
"Our baby died on prom night, and nothing was ever the same again." 


Corabelle doesn’t feel like any of the other college girls. On what should have been one of the happiest nights of her life, she and her boyfriend Gavin watched a nurse disconnect the ventilator from their seven-day-old baby. During the funeral two days later, Gavin walked out and never returned.

Since then, her life has been a spiral of disasters. The only thing that has helped is her ability to black out whenever the pain gets too hard to bear, a habit that has become an addiction.

When Gavin shows up in her astronomy class four years later, he is hell-bent on getting her back, insisting she forgive him. Corabelle knows she can’t resist the touch that fills the empty ache that has haunted her since he left. But if he learns what she has done, if he follows the trail back through her past, her secrets will destroy their love completely. And once again, she’ll lose the only person who always believed she was innocent.



WHAT I LIKED

The male MC. Though I wasn't crazy about his behavior all the time, I did find him relatable. He was a like not a love, though. I'm still not entirely sure I wanted the book to end the way it did where the romance is concerned. But I will leave it like that because spoilers suck. :)

WHAT I LOVED

The heartbreaking concept. As soon as I read the blurb on NetGalley I had to request it. That said, I didn't anticipate it being as triggering for me as it wasAnd the text rang true to the book blurb. I was hooked throughout. Read it in less than forty-eight hours, despite life and what not that required dealing with. 

On a related note--the authenticity. As the mother of a NICU preemie I can personally vouch for the authenticity of those flashback scenes. Unfortunately it seems the author can vouch for her authenticity personally. You should know if you've lost a child or had a baby spend time in an incubator before they were strong enough to go home, that some of these scenes may be difficult to read. But the authenticity is there for sure.


WHAT I WANTED MORE OF

Denouement--I felt like we were a chapter or two short of a full story arc. Some of the major themes were left unfinished or partially finished. I felt, quite strongly, that story ended too soon. 

A stronger female MC. There was a lot of rescuing going on, and not just by the male MC. I think in situations where the story opens with a situation that has clearly been traumatizing for the heroine, that aspect of the MC's character arc from hero blown sideways to hero as warrior is exceedingly important. I think more denouement would have offered the opportunity for the author to show more growth in the main character. 

Stronger, more intentional character arcs overall. While I found the plot and pace very strong throughout, I didn't see a lot of character growth happening. Not only did some of the couple's glaringly obvious flaws go unaddressed, as people the author didn't show us a heck of a lot of growth from chapter one to the final page. Some of the minor characters vanished altogether without any tying up of their story lines. 

Short story long, I was really engaged by this read, so much that I didn't want it to end. At least without us knowing the full story.

Have you picked up FOREVER INNOCENT yet? What did you think? GoodReads and Buy links are below!



Wednesday, November 6, 2013

Soul Possessed Blog Tour: Interview, Review, and Giveaway!



I'm super excited to be participating in the blog tour for SOUL POSSESSED, the second installment in Katlyn Duncan's THE LIFE AFTER series. Lots of awesome stuff included in this post, so be sure you read all the way to the very end!


A review of:

SOUL TAKEN (The Life After #1) by Katlyn Duncan


Release date: June 4, 2013
Publisher: Carina UK
Genre: YA Paranormal
ARC provided via Rockstar Book Tours in exchange for an honest review. 

Dannie says: Super cool concept and killer world-building. Pun intended.



After-life just got a lot more complicated

Maggie is a Soul Collector. It’s her job to transport souls from the Living Realm to the After – but during a mission to find a stolen soul, she ends up stuck in a teen mean girl’s body. 

Trapped, Maggie’s soul is catapulted into Ally’s life – and the human world she hasn’t experienced for one hundred years. But, as a descendant of the most powerful beings in the After, Maggie must rescue Ally before the girl’s soul dies… 

To survive, Maggie must uncover devastating secrets – because with one soul taken by a terrifying enemy, Maggie’s could be next!

WHAT I LIKED

The romantic subplot. By the end of the book it was a love for me, but at first I felt a little unclear about who was crushing on who and who I wanted to win. I can't say anymore for the sake of spoilers, but suffice to say, I was totally Team Somebody as I began reading book 2!

WHAT I LOVED

Though at times I felt like it came at the expense of character development, I loved, loved, LOVED the world-building in this book. I haven't read a huge ton of paranormal recently, but this stood out to me as a unique concept compared to those I had read. A big part of that was world-building. I felt the author did a great job of weaving the world-building elements in a way that wasn't too telly and I was very engaged with that aspect of the book from start to finish. 

WHAT I WANTED MORE OF

A more likable "victim". Maggie and Cooper spend a lot of time talking about how Ally "deserves better". I'm not sure I agree. She's kind of, well, a bitch. And while the narrative gives us motivations that factor into that, at the end of the day we make decisions for ourselves and we are accountable for those decisions. I would have been more invested in the book's outcome if I had found Ally likable. At the same time, I felt like this was an interesting and unique choice on the author's part, creating dissonance in the reader while still keeping us invested in the story. And the author did a great job in that respect. 

More showing of Maggie's skillz as a Soul Collector. The characters kept saying Maggie was "the best", but I didn't feel like the author showed us why this talent was unique or challenging when compared to other collectors. I think if we'd seen early on how difficult her task us or a true display of her talent, it might have endeared her to me more. 

Related to the previous comment, a stronger connection to the main character. While I definitely liked her and bought into her journey, I had a hard time connecting with her at first. Three chapters in, I felt like I hardly knew anything about her. Part of that was the plot itself, and the narrator's lack of memories, which made her a little unreliable, something I struggle with in general. By the book's end, though, I was totally bought in and ready to move immediately on to book 2. 

Which I did. :)

Short story long, I didn't skip a beat before moving on to Book 2. Check it out via the links below and let me know what you think! And stay tuned to this blog later this month for my review of SOUL POSSESSED! 




About Katlyn Duncan



Katlyn Duncan was born and raised in a small town in western Massachusetts. Her overactive imagination involved invisible friends, wanting to be a Disney Princess and making up her own stories. Her bibliophile mom always encouraged her love of reading and that stayed with her since. Even though she works full time in the medical field Katlyn has always made time for books, whether she is reading or writing them.
Katlyn now lives in southern Connecticut with her husband and adorable Wheaten Terrier and she is thrilled to finally share her stories with the world.



Tell us a little about your writer's journey so far:
I’ve been writing for as long as I can remember but late last year I was finally offered a contract for three books. It was thrilling to be recognized and I am still on Cloud 9.

Okay, let's hear your Twitter Pitch!
For Soul Taken: A Soul Collector finds herself stuck inside a mean girl’s body. As she tries to find her way out she is thrust into a dangerous adventure.

What inspired you to write this book? How is it a book only you could write?
It was one of those divine interventions where the idea just popped in my head one day. I think I’m the only one who can write this story because these characters and the world are of my own imagination.

What's your favorite thing about writing?
Letting my imagination run wild.

What's your least favorite thing?
Not having nearly as much time to read books other than mine. My TBR list is rapidly growing.

Now it's time to brag a little--What do you love most about your book?
The covers are fabulous!

Okay, now a little about you. (And yes, I stole these questions from In the Actor's Studio with James Lipton.)

What is your favorite word?
Murmur

What is your least favorite word? 
Irregardless

What turns you on?
Toned calf muscles on men

What turns you off?
Liars

What sound or noise do you love?
The dishwasher running

What sound or noise do you hate?
Nails on the side of a car

What profession, other than your own, would you most like to attempt?
Pianist

If Heaven exists, what would you like to hear G-d say when you arrive at the pearly gates? “Welcome”

Finally, what's the one question you've always wanted to answer in an interview? (And of course, you have to answer it!)

“Can I give you some cheesecake?”   Absolutely

Thanks, Katlyn! And stay tuned next month for my review of Book 2: SOUL POSSESSED! 


About Soul Possessed




Title: SOUL POSSESSED
Author: Katlyn Duncan
Release Date: October 28, 2013
Publisher: Carina UK
Series: Book 2, The Life After Trilogy
Genre: YA Paranormal
ISBN: 9781472044556


Life after Life

Now Maggie has been given the chance of her after-life to become a Guard, nothing will stand in her way. Not even the undeniable attraction she feels for her trainer and past love—Jackson. But when the battle between Shadowed and Guard begins again which side will she choose?

When her boss, Felix, partners Jackson and Maggie up with Ally and Cooper to investigate terrifying Shadowed activity, she doesn’t think it could get any worse. Jackson and Cooper barely tolerate each other and this time, Maggie isn’t just proving her loyalty to the Guard during one mission...she has a side mission too. One so secret and so dangerous she can’t tell a soul...



This Week on the Tour

Nov. 4th Chasm of Books – Guest Post
Nov. 5th Lost in Ever After – Review SOUL TAKEN
Nov. 6th Left to Write – Review SOUL TAKEN & SOUL POSSESSED + Interview
Nov. 7th Book2Buzz – Interview
Nov. 7th Endless Reading – Review SOUL TAKEN & SOUL POSSESSED
Nov. 8th Moonlight Gleam’s Bookshelf – Review SOUL TAKEN & SOUL POSSESSED + Guest Post


The Giveaway


There is a tourwide giveaway for an Amazon eGiftCard valued at $15 USD. It is open Internationally to anyone who is able to accept an Amazon GC. There is also a tourwide giveaway for a set of Kindle eBook copies of SOUL TAKEN and SOUL POSSESSED to one winner. The giveaway ends on Monday, November 11th at 11:59 p.m. Pacific.

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Monday, October 21, 2013

Top Ten Tuesday October 22, 2013

Top Ten Tuesday is a meme hosted by The Broke and The Bookish.Check the link to learn more and join the blog hop!



I'm doing my TTT post today because tomorrow is Trick or Treat with Agents! Info is here. So come back if you've got a completed MG, YA, NA, or A manuscript (no erotica, memoir, or PB please!) But without further ado...

TOP TEN CHARACTER NAMES


I'm a sucker for a good character name. I spend entirely too much time deciding what to name people in my own writing. I cheated a little this week and included some characters from movies or television, because at the end of the day that's all writing, too. 

Albus Percival Wulfric Brian Dumbledore

Ebeneezer Scrooge


Gandalf the Grey

Gargamel

Hannibal Lecter

Mayella Ewell 



Severus Snape

Tom Marvalo Riddle/I Am Lord Voldemort



















I think I'm just obsessed with the names of British characters. Okay, what's on YOUR list that I forgot???

Wednesday, October 16, 2013

What's Up, Wednesday for October 16, 2013

What's Up Wednesday is a weekly meme brought to you by Jaime Morrow and Erin Funk. Check out the links to see what other authors are up to.





Hi kids! It's been a while. What's up with YOU this week??

WHAT I'M READING
I just finished reading SOUL TAKEN by Katlyn Duncan for the upcoming book tour for Book 2 SOUL POSSESSED, which I'm participating in at the beginning of next month. An out of the box YA Paranormal that I really enjoyed! Review coming soon. For fun I just started Sarah Ocklar's TWENTY BOY SUMMER which OMG the hook? Amazeballs and heartbreaking. I'm also re-reading THE GUARDIANS by T.M. Franklin because when I first got the ARC I devoured it in about four hours because I had to know what happened! But I want to go back and re-read for my review for her tour next month.


WHAT I'M WRITING
I'm doing detailed chapter outlines for my NaNo project, which I am SUPER excited about. I'm cheating a little and doing a couple sample chapters before November, but only because my agent is making me. ;P My hope is to knock out all 80k during November. Wish me luck LOL!


WHAT INSPIRES ME
My amazing critique community Scribophile inspires me always, but especially this week. I called in a favor and they responded with enthusiasm and support. If you're like me and you prefer an online writing group to a live one or if you (also like me) haven't found a live writing group close to home that is exactly what you're looking for, you should check Scrib out. (And you can find me on there, too!)


WHAT ELSE I'M UP TO
Gearing up to judge/host Trick or Treat with Agents next week! The entry window is on Tuesday, October 22nd from 9AM-9PM, so if you are actively looking for an agent for your MG, YA, NA, or A manuscript, check out the deets HERE. Don't you just love my costume??

Just kidding...sorta. 

Otherwise I am busting my butt at the day job and taking on the majority of Mommy duties as hubby recovers from an impromptu gall bladder removal experience last week.



More importantly what are YOU guys up to! It's been forever since I participated in this hop and I'm glad to be back on the wagon!

XOXO 
Dannie

Sunday, October 13, 2013

Fall for the new NA Campaign!


Fall for the new New Adult: a campaign to spread the word that New Adult is expanding into new and exciting categories like Historical, Fantasy, Science Fiction, Gothic, and more! Follow along to find out why best-selling NA authors & NA bloggers are excited to see New Adult expand outside of contemporary. (Full schedule can be found here.) And as an incentive to give the new NA a try, the Fall for New Adult bundle set will be available for a limited time. Set includes 4 great non-contemporary NA novels for only $3.99!



So at the risk of admitting how incredibly old I am, when I was a member of the YA target audience, there was no such thing as Young Adult. We pretty much went from The Babysitters' Club to Flowers in the Attic (which is now shelved in YA anyway, but that's a debate for a different post.) And as far as reading genre fiction with teen protagonists? Forget it. There was no Twilight. There was no such thing as Harry Potter. 

It was a deprived childhood. 

Fast forward to college, and Harry Potter became a thing. It wasn't a THING yet, but it was a thing. I gobbled it up, SO excited to re-embrace my love of reading, but all the while wishing I'd had something like Harry to grow up with.

And yearning for a college-age equivalent I could relate to now. 

While I was in love with Harry, it was really the only source of pleasure-reading I was interested in. I was still missing a *me* from the books I liked to read. I'm still not a fan of bodice-rippers or chick lit that publishers seemed to think I *should* be reading at my age, but back then, those were my only options if I didn't want to read "kids books." And let's be real, people. The grownup sci-fi section of Barnes & Noble can be Creeperville for a cute college girl. 

In my day job, we call this sort of thing a "service gap": a need that's not being met in the mental health agencies that serve a community. For a long time, I've felt there was a service gap in fiction--books for and about the lives of older teens and early twenty-somethings. I've been lucky enough to be a big fan of contemporary fiction, so I've been one of the first to benefit from the New Adult category. Until recently, though, that's been the only option. In a time when genre fiction seems to know no bounds, there haven't been a lot of books outside of contemporary in New Adult. 

It's an interesting conundrum. We want girls to be into science and math, but we don't always see a lot of books that engage teen and college women in the pursuit of science. 

Until now. 

Take Kimberly P. Chase's THE APOLLO ACADEMY series. When I first read Book 1, I said it would blaze a trail for New Adult genre fic, and I'm so excited to see NA expanding its horizons. Not because it means I was right. Well, not only because it means I was right. 

So here's to New Adult genre fiction closing that service gap. And to twenty-something characters reaching for the stars. 






Purchase the Fall for New Adult bundle set here

We want to know why YOU want to see NA expand too! Join the campaign by grabbing the gif. above and blogging/tweeting about why YOU want to see NA expand! #NACampaign




Saturday, October 12, 2013

Fangirl Saturday! A Review of UNCONTROLLABLY WASTED by C. Elizabeth Vescio



Book Name: Uncontrollably Wasted (The Wasted Series, #2) by C. Elizabeth Vescio
Book Genre: New Adult
Pub date: Fall 2013 by Luna Station Press
ARC provided by author in exchange for an honest review. 
Dannie Says: I am uncontrollably obsessed with this book!

On Friday, I posted an interview with C. Elizabeth Vescio who is--hands down--my favorite new-to-me author of 2013. You can read the review of her debut in this series, ELEGANTLY WASTED, here. Here's a little about the sequel UNCONTROLLABLY WASTED, available now. Buy links at the bottom of the post!


It's been a year since Francesca Fairholm met the rest of the Osiris team and the company heads, her two half brothers Nero and Lex. As they groom her for leadership, it's all Frankie can do to keep her cynical sarcasm in check as she starts training two new Strikers, avoids the romantic advances of Spark Dawson, and does her best to pry a little family history from her cold, distant Aunt Alexa. 

With the pressure of her secret dual life building and her mother acting suspiciously, Frankie's sanity is pushed to the brink when she makes a grisly discovery that shakes the young Striker to her core. Despite her cousins' fear that her panic attacks signal a full mental breakdown, Frankie is positive she's not crazy. Finding clarity in her personal investigation into Osiris's origins, she uncovers more about the company than she would rather know.

As her life starts to unravel, things get deadly and, before she knows it, she's facing down an old target's pissed-off widow, an unstoppable mercenary, and the one thing she's most terrified of admitting to herself. 

It's possible the whole situation won't explode in her face. Yeah, like Frankie has that kind of luck.




WHAT I LIKED

Gawd, you guys. Nearly everything. I am such a fangirl of Cara's. And before you go saying we're twitter friends and that I'm biased, we became twitter friends because I got an ARC of one of her books and thought it kicked ass. I really need to skip the "Like" section of this review because I just love this book so hard.  

WHAT I LOVED

Vescio's attention to details: from character names to setting details to provocative use of color imagery, this book reads like a movie. I'm not a fan of doing blog posts involving casting actors who would play my characters on TV or IMAX, but I felt myself doing that as I was reading UNCONTROLLABLY WASTED. There is such beautiful imagery, beautifully horrible at times, haunting even, but I loved every bloody moment. (See what I did there?)

The characters--never in my life have I fallen in love with a more genuinely immoral and unsavory group of characters. Now granted, the kids I love working with most in my day job are the kids that every other staff member at the school is tired of dealing with, but even so. Lovable-but-jaded-and-borderline-sociopathic contract killers, people. Not an easy feat. Suspended disbelief. I has it. 

Completely appropriate use of narrative sarcasm. If I wasn't terrified she might kill me in my sleep I would want Francesca to be my bestie. Vescio has a way of using sarcasm and pop culture reference in her narrative voice that is just so fluid and natural. It's a testament to how well she knows her main character, because authenticity is everywhere you look. There are MANY laugh-aloud moments. Usually had at three in the morning while reading in the dark, much to my husband's dismay. 

The overall pace and flow of the plot. The structure is so sound in this book. Beyond conceptualizing a unique story, Vescio is a good writer. I'm not sure if she's a plotter or a pantser, but either way she works it out really, really well. 

How much fun this is to read. I said this with book one and I'll say it again. I love how out-of-the "traditional" NA box this series is. Yes there are sexytimes. But there's so much more in terms of new adult themes--identity and self discovery, growing up, etc--that I love about New Adult as a category. This is not your sorority sister's New Adult Contemporary. In fact, I'm pretty sure Frankie killed your sorority sister off while you were reading. 

The ending! And I'm going to work very hard not to spoil it for you, so let me just say this: I was really scared I was going to hate the ending. I was ready to be mad and ranty and kick my nonexistent Jimmy Choos in the dirt all Katharine Fairholm style because I thought I was gonna be disappointed. The ending is delicious and perfect. With just a hint of Dawson's Creek. It gave me ALL THE FEELS, people. 


WHAT I WANTED MORE OF

I felt like there was a little too much backstory for a sequel. At times toward the top of the book, I felt the pace was slowed down by explaining things we already knew from book one. Or catching us up on what had happened since book one in block narrative form. I think, though, that I am a bit pickier than most readers where this issue is concerned. So I'm not sure this will be an issue for most readers. 

Selfishness in the main character. I probably don't mean this in the way you think. What I mean is that, in general, I'm not a fan of this whole self-sacrifice/suicidality ya/NA trend. It REALLY bothered me and made me ranty in DEATHLY HALLOWS and again in INSURGENT. And a whole bunch of other YA and NA novels, too. I think it's a mistake psychologically speaking, to encourage martyrdom in this age group. So if I had to nitpick on one theme in UNCONTROLLABLY WASTED, that would be. 

Seriously, that's all I can find to pick on. This book is so good, you guys. 

Short story long, buy this book right now. No really. Right now. The links are below.






Wednesday, October 9, 2013

Book Blitz: MORE by T.M. Franklin


When today's Book Blitz happened across my inbox, I knew right away I had to participate. This was one of the first New Adult books I picked up that was not a contemporary romance. I was skeptical because, well, I'm me, but also because I had my doubts at the time that new adult could do genre fic the way YA does and still maintain it's categorical identity. If you've read my review of MORE, you know this was one of the very few, infrequent times I've been wrong about anything in my entire life. I consumed book 1 and moved immediately on to requesting a galley of Book 2, THE GUARDIANS, which I'll be reviewing here in the next couple weeks. In the meantime, here's a little about MORE, and an excerpt that will leave you, well, wanting more. Oh come, on, work with me here, people. 


More (More #1)
Release Date: 10/04/13

Summary from Goodreads:
Ava Michaels used to think she was special.

As a child, she fantasized about having magical powers . . . making things happen. But Ava grew up and eventually accepted the fact that her childish dreams were just that, and maybe a normal life wasn't so bad after all.

Now a young college student, Ava meets Caleb Foster, a brilliant and mysterious man who’s supposed to help her pass Physics, but in reality has another mission in mind. What he shows Ava challenges her view of the world, shaking it to its very core.

Because Caleb isn't quite what he seems. In fact, he's not entirely human, and he's not the only one.

Together, the duo faces a threat from an ancient race bound to protect humans, but only after protecting their own secrets—secrets they fear Ava may expose. Fighting to survive, Ava soon learns she's not actually normal . . . she's not even just special.

She's a little bit more.


EXCERPT


When closing time finally came around, Ava shivered as she walked out of the diner, huddling deeper into her wool coat and tugging her scarf up over her mouth. She hoisted her backpack higher onto her shoulder before setting off down the sidewalk, quickly covering the two blocks to campus and only looking over her shoulder nervously a handful of times.

Maybe a dozen.

Fifteen, tops.

She hurried down the walkway toward the dorms, the dim path lights flickering little circles of yellow on the frosted concrete. The moon glowed slightly behind the haze of wispy clouds, and a shout of laughter drew her attention to a couple coming toward her, arms entwined. They were dressed as Romeo and Juliet, their costumes partially hidden under thick coats and mittens. They kissed, breath clouding around them, and began to run, smiling at her as they went past.

She couldn’t help smiling back.

Their footsteps echoed away until once again, the only sounds interrupting Ava’s quiet breathing were the crunch of her own boots and the squeak of her backpack straps.

And . . .

Ava stiffened, the peculiar feeling sliding over her once again. She scanned the landscape around her, facing straight ahead but her eyes seeking, carefully combing the surrounding shadows.

Nothing.

Still, she couldn’t shake that creepy sensation that someone was watching her. She quickened her pace, slipping off her right glove and reaching into her coat pocket to grip her pepper spray tightly.

Was that . . . ?

Were those footsteps?

Ava’s heartbeat quickened, her palms growing moist even in the brisk cold. She flipped the safety off the pepper spray, her thumb poised over the button. As she neared the bridge marking the halfway point to her dorm, she glanced over her shoulder quickly. Seeing nothing, she hurried over the bridge, cursing the burned-out bulb that left it in darkness.

Suddenly, a stifling feeling overcame her—like a dark blanket had been thrown over her head to suffocate her—and she whirled around, her backpack clattering to the ground as she whipped the pepper spray out of her pocket and held it at arm’s length. Ava gulped for air, eyes frantically darting about, and the trembling hand holding the pepper spray flailing as wildly as her gaze. She was sure someone was there. She swore she could feel them. She stood frozen with fear, waiting . . . watching.

After a few long moments, she shook her head, glad nobody had witnessed her desperate panic. With a heavy sigh, she pocketed her pepper spray, embarrassed at her own ridiculousness. She had to stop this nonsense. She was driving herself crazy. It was just a dream making her jumpy, nothing else.

Just a crazy, scary dream.

Ava bent to pick up her backpack, sliding it onto her shoulder as she scanned the horizon one more time. With a self-deprecating chuckle, she turned around to continue home.

Only to stop short in terror.

A man—a huge man—stood before her, mouth twisted in rage. He towered over her, at least six and a half feet tall, his shoulders wide, and arms banded with muscle. Shaved close to his head, his dark hair shadowed his skull, and his intimidating appearance was only enhanced by the jagged scar running down the right side of his face, from forehead to chin. He didn’t wear a coat, only a tight, black shirt and fatigues, black boots on his feet, and a wide leather belt with a mean-looking gun holstered at his hip.

It couldn’t be. But it was.

It was him. The man from her nightmares.

Ava scrambled back, but he reached out in a flash, gripping her upper arms and lifting her up so her toes barely brushed the ground. One hand slid to her throat, and he held her easily, pulling her closer to his frightening face.

“Please,” she begged, the word catching as she fought to breathe.

The man’s glare tightened, and Ava stared in morbid fascination at his mismatched eyes—blue and green—odd and vividly terrifying. She struggled, reaching for her pepper spray, only to have it slip from her fingers as she kicked out at the man.

He responded by laughing humorlessly, flipping her around and banding one arm around her torso. His grip was like iron, and she could barely breathe.

“Please,” she said again, dizziness closing in. “I can’t,” she gasped.
A press of metal to her temple transformed her fearful trembles into horrified shudders. She had no doubt. She was going to die. Her eyelids fluttered shut in defeat as he cocked the gun, the loud click echoing off the trees.

Then, a flash of black, a gust of wind, and suddenly she could breathe again. The man’s grip loosened, but he didn’t release her.

“Damn you,” he growled. “Stay out of this!”

Ava pushed him, her efforts in vain, as he hitched her up in response, tucking her under his arm like a bag of groceries. She kicked her legs, flailing desperately as the man spun about, pointing his gun into the darkness.

“Show yourself, you coward!”

The same flash of black, another blast of wind, and Ava fell to the ground, her head cracking on the concrete. She curled onto her side, moaning, lifting a hand to the back of her head, and squinting in shock at the blood that came away, streaking across her trembling palm.

Low grunts and the crack of bone on flesh floated on the air toward her, muzzy with her disorientation. She tried to focus, but could only make out two dark figures exchanging blows. Ava tried to sit up, but collapsed back onto the icy ground, overcome by a shock of dizziness and nausea.

Suddenly, the two dark beings seemed to meld into one, and in the next moment, she felt herself floating. She blinked; a face took form above her briefly, the features cast in shadow.

“Do I . . . do I know you?” she mumbled, fighting for consciousness.

“I’ve got you,” a low voice replied, and Ava nodded as a cool palm stroked her forehead, and the darkness consumed her.
-MORE, Chapter 4


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About the Author

T.M. Franklin started out her career writing non-fiction in a television newsroom. Graduating with a B.A. in Communications specializing in broadcast journalism and production, she worked for nine years as a major market television news producer, and garnered two regional Emmy Awards, before she resigned to be a full-time mom and part-time freelance writer. After writing and unsuccessfully querying a novel that she now admits, “is not that great,” she decided to follow the advice of one of the agents who turned her down—write some more and get better at it. Her first published novel, MORE, was born during National Novel Writing month, a challenge to write a novel in thirty days.

She lives in the Pacific Northwest with her husband, Mike, is mom to two boys, Justin and Ryan, and has an enormous black dog named Rocky who’s always lying nearby while she’s writing. Whether he’s soothed by the clicking of the computer keys or just waiting for someone to rub his belly is up for debate.

In addition to MORE, Franklin penned the Amazon best-selling short story, Window, as well as another short story, A Piece of Cake, which appears in the Romantic Interludes anthology. The sequel to MORE, The Guardians, will be released November 7, 2013.

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