Most
of the “keywords” I’ll mention in these plotting posts are from Larry Brooks’ series on story structure
(i.e. 6 core competencies). That’s because his definitions and explanations
make sense to me in a more concrete way than any other method of plotting I’ve
tried.
It
works for me. It won’t work for everyone. But if you’re a plotter and you
haven’t read his series on
NaNoWriMo, you really should.
Especially
if you’re writing YA if your FPP is also your hook, your hook is happening way
too late. And that’s why it’s important to get your FPP right: It matters to
agents and editors. If your FPP comes too late (and it should come around ¼ of
the way through your book) you’ll get feedback that your story ‘started in the
wrong place.’ If it’s not significant
enough you’ll hear ‘not enough stakes’ or ‘conflict is too vague.’ The nice
part about plotting is that if you figure out what your FPP is ahead of time,
you don’t have to worry about that.
So
what is the FPP, which Larry Brooks refers to as ‘the most important moment in
your story’? It’s the moment when the story’s main conflict becomes clear to
your main character—when he is given his mission. It’s the moment after which
your hero can’t take it back.
Today
we’re going to look back at the list of scenes we identified, at our basic
pitch, and our character goals and motivations and identify our First Plot
Point. And for those who are fully embracing this whole architecture and
plotting thing, the links below will help you take that further to identify
some smaller moments between your inciting incident and your FPP.
Some
concrete FPP examples:
Harry Potter arrives at Kings Cross Station
and meets Ron Weasley. Together, they board the Hogwarts Express.
At the Choosing Ceremony, Beatrice chooses
Dauntless.
Katniss decides to ‘play along’ with the
love story angle with Peeta in order to stay alive.
THE
HUNGER GAMES’ plot architecture is pretty twisty-turny. So much that Larry
devoted an
entire series of blog posts to laying out its structure. It’s a great
example to check out if you’ve got the time and interest.
Today’s Links:
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